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一所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。未能达到预期的写作目的。第一档(1一3分)遗漏或未清楚表述大部分内容要点，或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰.意义不连贯。完全未达到预期的写作目的。零分未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。第二节：参考范文：But as the class progressed,something unex pected happened.Brad didn't just sit therequietly,he actively participated in the lesson.He listened intently,raised his hand to answerquestions,and even asked questions himself.Bradley couldn't help but notice the surprisedlooks on his teacher's face and the nods of approval.As the day went on,it became clear toBradley that his dad's intention was not to embarrass him but to teach him a valuable lesson.After school,Bradley hesitantly approached his dad with newfound appreciation."Thanks,Dad,"he said quietly."I didn't realize you were trying to teach me somethingimportant.I know the importance of taking education seriously and respecting my teachers.Irealize my attitude is not only affecting my own learning but also disrupting the learningenvironment for others.Bradley's dad put a hand on his shoulder and smiled."I love you,son.Sometimes we need to learn things in a hard way,but I'm always here for you.一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分，按五个档次进行评分。2.评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：(1)创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分时还应注意：(1)词数少于120的，的情扣分。(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。(3)书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。【高三英语·参考答案第5页（共6页）】·24-390C·